Sorry, but it is unlikely that anybody will have the time to revise your inputs for you.
Some points to note:
pressure fluctuations are large for condensed systems since they are not very compressible. that carries over to fix npt where small volume changes will result in large changes in pressure. this requires careful averaging for both the determination of the actual average pressure and volume. please also note that those fluctuations decrease with larger system size.
related to the previous issue: you have to make certain that you use a properly converged volume for the second step of your calculation. It would help to do multiple runs with decorrelated starting geometries to get a measure of the error bars in your results.
there are commented examples in the LAMMPS distribution for the same kind property calculation. try comparing your workflow with those and detect possible inconsistencies